Tuesday 15 October 2013

Feedback • 15/10/2013

I attended the feedback session today with my fellow peers and Lawrence, and gained an insight into my peers' thought processes and how their projects were coming along, as well as feedback on my own project and what other people thought.


I showed Lawrence the edited version of my original photograph, and we all agreed it looked better without the distracting elements that drew our eye away from the chair. I now plan to go back to this location on Thursday and photograph the minute changes for my series, and then Photoshop the distracting elements out using the healing brush like I did to the above photograph.


We also all agreed that this photograph just did not work as part of my series and was nowhere near as good as the original image I shot. Although the photograph is visually appealing, the composition does not work, and closes some elements of what I can slightly change regarding my series.


Some of my peers commented that the shot of the hands was too wide, and I should crop as much as possible so that the hands are the sole thing in the shot. However, I really like the composition of this shot, and do not think it will work well as a cropped image. However, I am going to experiment with closer crops before I take my final images.

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